Rap Battle
| Voting Style: | Open | Point System: | 7 Point | ||
| Started: | 10/10/2014 | Category: | Miscellaneous | ||
| Updated: | 7 years ago | Status: | Post Voting Period | ||
| Viewed: | 2,487 times | Debate No: | 62767 | ||
 Pro Accept when you can. Why waste a perfectly good killer rap? Let's use it against someone and put it to the test... (It didn't count in the other debate anyways, so I don't think it really matters I'm re-using this...:P) *Plays super rap music in the background with beat* Yo guys, everybody, I'm feelin' like doin' this again It's time for somebody to die, or are you not a brave man? Round one's not acceptance, you start rappin' from there But beware of my presense, you'll fear me like that Death Bear For I fly wtihout impair, high in the air, like a magic unicorn mare Take care, you'll be scared, shudderin' at my terrifyin' blares You crawl on the floor like a beatle, I can crush you so easily But I'm not ready to let you just settle, gonna stab your skin an' bones deeply Ha, you fall on the floor, crawl in place like a poor old retired clown We all know you stink like a whore, sniffin' your own scent an' you still fall down I be shinin' bright as a dazzlin' star, you be like a lonely firefly I stand above you so darn far, can't even hear your tiny dire cries You think you're a worm? More like a slug, a little insignificant bug I can easily throw salt, make you squirm, or just sweep you under the rug My victory is not just a mere approximation, nor a close estimation It's already determined by divination, 100-percent true prediction You already lost this as you lost your love, job and all your bliss It would be better if you just jumped into an endless abyss Better surrender already with your white flag, wearin' your dumb rags You're a hobo not worth fightin', they all spit on you an' call you a hag  Con Hey all my homies, I’m doing yet another rap debate, Calling all guys, girls, pegasisters [1] and bronies [2] - watch me wipe 9space off his slate. By the time I finish with little 9spaceking, he’ll be in a state. He won’t ever dare enter a rapping ring, “no rap debates” for him will be a mandate.
I’m not a brave man, I’m a valiant woman. You’ll be begging for a ban, when I’ve showed you all my hands. You can try all you can, but this, right here, is my land – Should’ve ran, or you might as well just bury yourself in the sand.
I’m a Bookworm, I don’t crawl. I can slither through tiny crevices and creaks. When we finish here, Ima be standing tall, while you cry to your momma [3] about how you so weak. I can picture it now – how you would bawl, ranting on and on about how you’re a freak. Why do you think I’ve, to the last minute, stalled? So it’d be less obvious that you got mutilated by a geek.
You ain’t got any jurisdiction, to refer to anyone as a whore. You might be wishing you were fiction, because when this is done, you’ll be nothing more. Get an epitaph for your destruction, forever shall be highlighted with its excellence and gore. My raps are like construction – building up amazing sites and galore.
Maybe someone’s backside you’re trying to kiss? Or maybe you just missed it because of your tired wrists? Your flaws and inadequacies – I can put in a list. When I’m done here, I’ll shove it in your face with my fist. I guess, of what I’m saying, you get the gist, and don’t get too pissed, but I’ve already won this. |
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Pro Your sources are just lame fillers, you got no real material
I got no sources an' I'm still an amazin' killer, not to mention serial Your sentences are just fragments, when you wrote this your mind was absent It's as if you're welcomin' my victory, knowin' it's an unstoppable advent My hand of cards still remain unbeatable, Poker-face unreadable, actions unpredictable Your poor achievements are so bad they're unspeakable Your demise is sad yet already set, story's uncompletable In this rap battle I remain as strong as adamant Your poor rhythm and rhyme offer my easy dominance Your small size gives to you little prominence Sand? Puh-leaze, to me that's completely incompetent You think your raps can make good stuff, but it's all just a bluff Readin' books simply ain't enough, fancy words are just fluff 'ey only make you so dorky no guy'll date or even come to you Even the nerdiest of nerds compared to you, they're way too cool My opponent doesn't even understand my complex verse This only shows fur'er evidence 'at she's way worse I can destroy her, line by line with little cannon bursts Her ship is already sank, and her womb is thus dispersed There's no way she can win, her stuff belongs in the trash bin Even reading her stuff's a sin, no one wants her, not even her kin She thinks she's tall, but compared to me she's a neanderthal She completely failed, not only in this rap, but in life she's also yaw'd* *This word means to swerve off course/deviate from direct course, for those that are too lazy to look this up See: http://dictionary.reference.com... Con It’s best to hold onto your cards at times, to employ yourself as alluring and mysterious. 9space admitted to being a serial killer in his rhymes, but we all know the best psychopaths can hide and trick every one of us. Thank you 9space, for my second rap battle win, I just hope, that crushing you like this, won’t be a sin. Your rhymes are lame and pathetic, like your debating skills- My first rap was a winning piece, and this one is the icing on the cake. Your rap was as ugly as Adam [1] from Beauty and the Beast, sending me this challenge was a mistake. Your cards have been beaten and many times too in fact, [2] you even lost to me when I crushed you at art. I was gonna consider making you a pact – go easy on you – as if I had a heart, but my thirst, couldn’t be sedated, to tear you apart.
Your rapping sucks [3] so much, that you lost to Truth_Seeker [4] You’re losing your touch, since Bekah rejected you in your porn thread, you’ve gotten weak-er. Why else would you claim, to be going on a DDO hiatus? My achievements are unspeakable, because it’ll make dorks like you jealous. They’re prominent and adorable, and would make you feel helpless. I’m a Bookworm and I write my own story. I don’t sit back in space, floating around doing nothing. I’m full of pride and glory- maybe one day, from that, you’ll learn something. My rapping makes yours look whack. I’ll take a bow and wrap it up, send it to you as a present. I apologize for my cruel attack- Picking on someone so tiny, weak and innocent. I’m not small, you underestimate me, as such you might end up hating me – As you see me - real, and my true rap battle skills, you feel. I’ll take it down a notch, so you can run to your mummy, Careful you don’t wet your crotch, we all know your scared you can be, When you go up against someone with ultimate talent- like me, And I do something like this to you – impalement, - make you bleed. Reading books take one to a new world, where you don’t exist. It takes one on adventures, beyond valleys, new experiences, away from the desolate, lonely mists. Books help one learn, and become intelligent and prosperous, thus clearly 9space doesn’t read. Books guide you onto good paths – mountainous, to achieve your dreams, to learn what you need. I’m a strong, independent woman, so I don’t need any man to “come to me.” I’ll do whatever I can, unlike you, and happy, I shall be. Nerds are awesome! Don’t be hating! Plus, if you’re cooler than me, that just means I’m hotter than you brethren. [5]
It mustn’t have even been rehearsed – we know someone bus’d that Maybe my username should’ve had to do with space, ‘cause my raps are out of this world. 9space is just full of envy, because he knows he can’t rap like me, I pull him out of his seat, and show him skills he can only wish to achieve. I show him what I can be, and he becomes unhappy Because he knows that I’ve, not only won this rap battle, but I crushed him by infinity.
Goodwin’s too immature, but this’ll be a good loss for him, getting chills, maybe take some chill pills, have your fill. 9spaceking, I took you off your throne, and broke your ego, chance of winning and will. Bow peasant, to me, your queen of zest and tone, of thrill, - I guess the “serial killer” failed at his kill. Sources: [1]- http://en.wikipedia.org...(Disney) [3]- http://www.internetslang.com... [5]- http://www.merriam-webster.com... Thanks for a fun debate! |
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| Total points awarded: | 4 | 2 |
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| Total points awarded: | 3 | 0 |
Aggression is nonexistence in an online rap battle. Calling someone a "muthafukka" doesn't make you more lyrical or bada$$.
I don't know how the hell you lost ESB. 9SpaceKing and 99% of all these "so called battle rappers" from this website: are fhucking trash! From someone who watches: URL, Don't Flop, Jump Off, Fight Klub, KOTD, Grind Time, Ultimate Warrior, Basement Mentality, 106 Park etc... all of you guys are trash. Amateur bars with no legitimate context.
My vote goes to ESB for her rebuttals and actually making sense when she rapped.
1. As a female debater rapping, you have the element of anticipation on your side vs. a guy. Use it. How? Read:
2. No cutesy stuff unless you can pull off a Meghan Trainor: http://www.youtube.com...
3. Aggression, this can easily be seen in text by profanity (fhuck you, motherfhucka); vulgarity (you aint fhuckin pu$$y like John Belushi, you eatin' dick like Cheney, no, not Lynn--you boy band listenin' NSync fan); obscenity [which is rarely done] Start using aggressive wording
4. Quit with the lead ins (Yo, let me tell you a story; Listen up ya'll this is...). Lead-ins are weak & waste space for harder rhymes. Here's an example of your first words in R1 rewritten:
My homie told me I'ma a rogue like Pyro, I'm scrotchin' & blazin' X's on men in this rap debate like a firefly
Callin' out this unwise guy cause I Pierce fear & I punched 9 Space like Tyson 9 times to the left eye.
I finish off this 3rd Grade sucka like a Math problem, subtract his @ss when I divide him into a fractional state
Never again will he challenge me to a mandate, it's Fate that niggas like him I King-Queen-move checkmate
As you see I used some of your key words to create a harder diss. This example is lyrically nuclear becuz of all the similes & metaphors used in clever wordplay: Rogue & Pyro=Xmen, Pyro's power is fire; Guy Pierce with fear; Tyson's punching power; 3rd Grade, Math=subtraction, division, & fractions, King (playing of his name & chess) Queen (you & chess) to checkmate him.
5. Brevity. Mikal is this only crappy rapper than can write thesis long raps & win the debate. Notice when other debaters do this, the debate gets few votes. Blade of Truth is nearly the only rapper that can slaughter you with few, concise lines. My point is when you write fewer lines (16 & below) people pay more attention to what you have to say. Keep ya lines down & you'll begin to kill these dudes.