Rap battle NDECD1441 vs RMTheSupreme
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after 5 votes the winner is...
RMTheSupreme
| Voting Style: | Open | Point System: | 7 Point | ||
| Started: | 7/17/2018 | Category: | Music | ||
| Updated: | 3 years ago | Status: | Post Voting Period | ||
| Viewed: | 895 times | Debate No: | 116628 | ||
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 Pro  Con Two Things 1) Since I go first, I give up the last round (give up as in don't rap, not forfeit the debate) 2) DISCLAIMER: This is a rap battle and the threats or derogatory views I display are how you win a rap battle. They are about playing a role, not about the real me. I do not agree to some things I will say in rap battles, thank you. Who the hell is this fool? 2 Battles, second forFEITED, he QUIT IT and he's still getting schooled, He's a rabbit to this FOX, This site's a BOX and he's a tool, I'm gonna USE him for a LOSS on his record let this b***h get ridiculed, Battle-rap's a DRUG and this THUG aint NOTHin' but a mule, (http://www.dailymail.co.uk...) He's a 15-year-old BUNny-LOVin kid that thinks he's cool, (Eminem was known as 'P Rabbit' and his avatar is Eminem) But what's 'cool' to this ice-cold, blood-solidifyin' pool? Boy you're nothing BUT a BABY, tears down your face one-minute in, I'm gon' light you UP kid SHADY soon as you step into this ring, (lighting the shade, setting on fire take it how you want, Em = slim shady) Why you hatin' Barbie in your profile? Is the issue that she's grown? Is it DORA the the exPLORER that you'd rather take your bone? You're a sick little MONSTER but you about to get slain, Boy wipe that saliva right off 'fore I cut into your brain, You think you're on my level but your from darkness, mister Bane, And I'm not the bat-worshipping Jester that you want to bring you pain. (Bane was not half the villain the Joker was and I call myself Rational Madman) http://www.youtube.com... |
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Pro But I can see through your lies think what it means of that to me It all comes down to our masterpieces of raps to see Unfortunately your first line has already guaranteed you're crap to be I throw out consistent rhymes, you throw up at consistent times I get nothing out of you except for persistent crimes Whether you have a death wish or are just stupid, there is no telling Eminem is B-Rabbit bjtch, check your spelling I forfeited out last because I couldn't be bothered I sent the challenge this time so again you'd be conquered I'm crying of laughter, must be the tears I'm shedding I'd smite you in this ring before you even get in You've made a huge part with my profile, some wack shjt and some batman That's unoriginal to use now, your insane, you're a madman But you're in no way rational, that's a fact for your wack rants The only part of you left will be a broken soul and some jacked pants You could never do it the way like I could do it Screw it, you had your chance to blow up then blew it I would spit fire at you but that wouldn't be the cool bit You signed up for this and that simply secures the fool shjt How humiliating, your final moments met with a wet stain You claim you will kill me but you couldn't cope with the stress gain I'd snap you in half bjtch, this middle-schooler causes neck strain I leave my AUDience awed, you need to explain Now how could you say I'm a rabbit, yet again you'd be hunted When I'm a tool, it would be the drill that you trusted I'll drill into your skull as you stare as me flustered That is what you really get for taking your few wins for granted You really walked into this one, this is shjt, it's a trap I'm finally about to show you what really is rap You walk in confident and all, but little does he know It's RMTheSupreme's end bjtch, give me my elo Con *stretches arms wide, drinks an energy drink and sways his head side to side* Rrrrrrround Twoooo  DISCLAIMER: This is a rap battle and the threats or derogatory views I display are how you win a rap battle. They are about playing a role, not about the real me. I do not agree to some things I will say in rap battles, thank you. ----------- Fire, fire risin' higher, to your Empire yes I am, You sing to the cops like you're a CHOIRboy holding his balls up in his hand, But the issue with your squealin' is you're LIAR, not a man, You're teling things like our first battle was your win; DUMB b***h that's ONE bad plan. [http://www.debate.org...] You had a troll voting in your favor and you still couldn't get a single loss past the undisputed CHAMpion's hands, You done stepped in the WRONG RING you SMALL THING, FALLING over my leg as I strike you with bars so SCORCHING hot they brand,(https://en.wikipedia.org...) Bane in the darkness, blind to your mistakes, Why even call this a battle? It's a SH**-SHOW; pi**-take, I'm gon' tame you, put a saddle on, SICK-FLOW whippin' 'til ya break, You're not a wild horse, you're a human seat I sit on when I'm bored You say I'm throwing up CONSISTENTLY, yeah that because I'm iller... Your nothing but a LITTLE CHIMP, come say hi to this gorilla, Your MIDDLE SCHOOL'S PRINCIPAL concerned that you're getting frailer, thinner, Picking fights with bigger kids that could easily eat your fragile heart for dinner, Hop-on, little rabbit, you're not a rapper, you're a fan, You will never ever comprehend the strategy behind the madness of this man, I'm a one of a kind rapper, you're a dime a dozen Stan.(https://www.nme.com...) http://www.youtube.com... |
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Pro You really think you're the one who won't be having shjt too I'ma pistol, until this field is peaceful Piss you out of my bars it's influ- -ence, when they say you're one of a kind, I'll say you're simply the incompetence that some of us find Your threats are nothing but words, they portray brawn over mind I portray the very animal you exacerbate, pictures drawn over rhymes You pretend you're a predator for prey, the night to the day Your imagination runs wild man, what can I say I'll thank you for the win soon, circle Black Friday Act's over 'cause with animals, ND don't play When even a troll doesn't vote for you, you know it's over I'm sick of reading your raps while I am sober I'm a crush you filthy pebble, this guy is a boulder You're bold to bring in the heat but it will get colder I spit facts in my raps, you make assertions I'll kill you once and then again, till I'm on par with the Germans You're a liar, you're a wannabe rapper, a burden I'd spit on you more than when we go on excursions The only shjt in this show is your fragile base stations I uphold more power than thirteen nations So I drink tap water? You couldn't sustain basins You commented in the rounds, all three were explainations I basically skipped through your rap after a few of your insults It's an insult to fight such a weakling, proof will be in the results You're acting a bit angry, tell me, did you eat the salts Because salt me Pepper, I screw clans and I fling cults So if I'm a Stan at least I have some one to admire Too look up to and aim for, you're only a squire To the rap game, not a player, I'm higher I'm a 'Rap God' bjtch you should address me as Sire Or should it be meant for a knight, 'cause I'm as dark as the night Your Bane engulfed in darkness, it's the humor that's bright So we can point out the irony in dark humor, it's tight YOU THINK EMPHASIZING WITH CAPS LOCK REVEALS JUST YOUR MIGHT Notice we have another round, so I'm going to spare you You'll have to step up your game, you'd have to be careful You can run but can't hide, if you go I'll be there too It's a secure loss for you mate, hope that didn't scare you Con It's CUTE you TRIED and to SOOTHE your PRIDE, I'll say I adMIRE that you didn't TRY to reFUTE you LIED, But if we DO anaLYSE the BULLsh*t and disGUISE... You portay as the TRUE YOU, it's like a product with reVIEWS like "Do not BUY!!" You're a joke and HALF, you're a walkin' diSASter, First foot in the CLASS, even the nicest kids point and LAUGH AT ya. Calling me a pebble, recycling 'animal' calling yourself a real deal RAPPER? You're like a background character in a soap opera, coming at this Brad Pitt-Bull you cute Lil Puppy ACTOR. It's hilarious how you copied my Chimp vs 'Rilla line with the pebble vs Boulder, Did you think I wouldn't notice it or I'd be naive, I'm not just better than you I'm older, Kid you just DON'T GET IT, you're at most a POETIC soldier, I'm a f****n' General, you simple-minded paTHETIC poser, I hand you some ROPE and order to CHOKE yourself, I god-damn dare you day "No sir!". You're a TRASH god to the people who have no coherent taste, You're a flip-flopping TRASH BAG, only intake and dish-out waste, You may well be a dark knight in your mind, a vigilante on a case, But as you try to sneak on me you'll find I aint the kind of villain to out-chase, 'Cause you're right that I can't run faster, I aint built for that prey-pace, And I don't camouflage or hide myself, I blatantly put war-paint on my face, So come and show yourself, and as I lay my bars on you, you'll taste, Blood, spit, puke, defeat and any other thing one would taste before a fatal light-dimming haze. http://www.youtube.com... |
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Pro Blood, spit, shjt all you mentioned were such to see You represent all those things and taste horrible if I'm not gonna lie I'm a poetic soldier? You're just a casualty in demise The only thing general about you are your bars Strength, lies and analogies that's as bland as mars I'm an alien, my raps are out of this world, you had better tread carefully No sir, I'm not a liar, and I reject your orders I god damn dare, you'll see It disappoints me to see all the lies you spit Do not buy? I don't buy that, now that's true shjt You expect you can run into the general battle and lose it If we were simply a brain, you would be the confused bit I'd be the intellectual whole, my bars as witty Just as much as your wannabe raps are shjtty You don't want to pick a fight with NDECD When this ends, you'll be running screaming "CHARLIE BIT ME" I pray to god I'll be forgiven for the arson I'm bringing The second you cry for help, you may as well have been singing Soprano on a mic, do the words have any bells ringing You high-pitched son of a bjtch you sure are a thin thing You couldn't top my lyricism, I would give you sugar high I'm really helping you by killing, it'd be best if you sooner die If you hear that I'm wack, don't listen rumors lie You reuse insults, it doesn't even humor I I'm a debating master, the world rap ruler Your rhymes ain't even straight, how can a man be super? It's a desperate attempt, let's see which rap is cuter When you claim to be a god and all but I walk right up and screw ya Comparisons are indeed a large part of best of the aims To say I copied your lil' line is a desperate claim You've reached you peak then you'll fall as the air force comes close Kong's gonna get shot down and RM the same I'm the soldier who first climbed the wall, this product is priceless I'm a disaster in your path, you could ask why's this When I send the big guns after you, I'm more formidable than ISIS You're a candle to my shadow this battle is a mid-life crisis So it's BP debating season, let's talk contribution Say I'm the champion player, he's just the party losin I'll show you the analysis he's brought today I'll discard those and tell you why he'll lose, touche So he has said that I lie, he is a gorilla and villain He basically talks about the skill he is left concealing But if there is one thing, you're slow, that you conceded So instead of being overpowered, I'd say you're conceited I addressed them both parties, the supreme meme and the disser I stabbed you multiple times, you probably simply missed the Point of this battle, I did all of the things you did sir But one thing you didn't do is address me as a mister So I effectively rebut, you just act like the favorite one I bring out new arguments, you at most waver some I win in contribution, proof is in the points later on I'd say your lies slander me but I believe you've had that favor done |
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5 votes have been placed for this debate. Showing 1 through 5 records.
Vote Placed by JimShady 3 years ago
| NDECD1441 | RMTheSupreme | Tied | ||
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| Who had better conduct: | - | - | | 1 point |
| Had better spelling and grammar: | - | | - | 1 point |
| Made more convincing arguments: | - | | - | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 4 |
Reasons for voting decision: RMTheSupreme wins all 3 rounds by a comfortable margin in my opinion. Both rappers seem to have improved since I last saw them, but RM is just objectively better in this battle. Double and triple rhymes are common with him, and occasionaly he throws in a quad. NDECD mainly has doubles and singles, with occasional trips. Also, some of NDECD's rhymes were complete failes, such as flustered/granted (R1), peaceful/influ (R2). However he still has most excellent lines, like "You're bold to bring in the heat but it will get colder" (R2). But RM... damn, some I laughed out loud how good they were. For example, "Is it DORA the the exPLORER that you'd rather take your bone?" (R1). On top of that, the pacing and phrasing seems to work better with RM's... flow is a difficult thing to judge when rap is only written, but to me, it sounds like RM took a lot of time thinking out syllables and line lengths. Either that or he is just a top-notch freestyler. But yup, both rappers were a delight to read.
Vote Placed by TurleDoveSammie 3 years ago
| NDECD1441 | RMTheSupreme | Tied | ||
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| Made more convincing arguments: | - | - | | 3 points |
| Used the most reliable sources: | - | | - | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 2 |
Reasons for voting decision: Both opponents had their own style of rapping and they're own approach to stepping up to the other. Con provided songs of which he used in his own way and put together to form his own style so that makes his style unique. Pro did well tho too.
Vote Placed by Danielle 3 years ago
| NDECD1441 | RMTheSupreme | Tied | ||
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 3 | 0 |
Reasons for voting decision: Comments.
Vote Placed by Topaet 3 years ago
| NDECD1441 | RMTheSupreme | Tied | ||
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| Used the most reliable sources: | - | - | | 2 points |
| Total points awarded: | 0 | 3 |
Reasons for voting decision: Con had more humorous lines such as "You're a TRASH god to the people who have no coherent taste" than Pro and Con's final paragraph in the third round was unmatched in quality by Pro, thus Con won this debate.
Vote Placed by dsjpk5 3 years ago
| NDECD1441 | RMTheSupreme | Tied | ||
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| Total points awarded: | 3 | 0 |
Reasons for voting decision: Pro had better flow and wordplay.
In R1, Con made fun of Pro's age, Eminem fandom, And Pro's prior forfeit. I thought his "Bunny" remark was clever, And the dig about Pro liking young girls was pretty good. . . Though slightly less amusing when you realize Pro is actually in middle school lol. Neither side really had much personal ammo to use against each other (for disses) which is probably for the best, And I thought Pro made up for it through more interesting lyrics. For instance "I'm a rap god bitch, You should address me as Sire" in response to the Eminem-fan talk.
Overall I think Pro's lyrics were just more clever. Usually I'd go into a really in-depth breakdown, But this is probably one of the last votes I'll cast on a dying website so I don't think people really care. To highlight some examples though:
"Screw it, You had your chance to blow up then blew it" (the word 'and' should have been put between up & then for better flow) sounds really cool.
"I leave my AUDience AWED, You need to explain" (sounds better if you rap ex-plain). I think that's a good line.
And I just think Pro had better use of multi and slant rhymes in general. Examples include his very last verse concluding with: favorite one / waiver some / later on / favor done.